hey, this looks really nice. I like the way you drew the two of them. The doujinshi seems interesting. I'll definitely read it if you continue on posting; being a SAsuNaru yaoi is a plus. keep on posting
Yeah when I was little a lot of my yaoi comments were really corny and didnt make much sense..It would jump to something funny to something REALLY serious..I have a problem with keeping a balance of the comics mood sometimes. (Having that problem right now as I drew the second page) But ive gotten a little bit better over the years. I honestly dont know where this comic is going though, I just randomly started it without thinking it through. I just REALLY hope it comes out decent until the end..I really need to plan these things out. I feel like an total idiot.
Za Neh~~~~ I knew I recognized your art style! In the begginging, I was like, "Oh, a doujinshi.." And then I started panicking and getting sad because Sasuke was ignoring Naruto D: And it was left at a cliffie and my heart skipped a beat because I thought it was a one-shot. But I saw page one, and your pen name, and I was like oh! Yay! yippies ^^
But yeah, aside from that, I really like the color you used to draw on unlike the cliche color of white. It gives it a nice and unique touch ^^ And oh, yay :3 I like colored bubbles
Awesome job! And whoa! 60+ faves in less than a day! xD Can't wait for the next page, ^^
Thank you! And thank you for all of your..Spam comments LOL. (Not that I didnt mind) I wanted to reply back to all of them but their were like 10 and I was like "AGHH D:" So I just read them all and sorta replied back inside my brain LOL..Im so sorry ive been so busy sometimes its hard to reply back to people because so many people are always messaging me/commenting stuff and sometimes Im just to dam lazy..
No worries, I have the same thing going on. Fortunately I had some time yesterday so I decided to check out the rest of your updates/artwork and comment. I've always loved the pencil look, the sketchy look. It has more charm to it in my opinion. Will you keep it this way for the remainder of the doujin? Because that would be pretty cool.
Oh yes, that always happened to me. You see, what you are actually supposed to do is do a really light (that you can barley see it) planning of the drawing..Take a fountain pen and just draw it all in with ink. Its hard but thats what all the creators of the mangas (Naruto, Bleach, DBZ etc) do when creating their next comics..They dont have time to draw the whole thing then go back and ink it all ink. Its WAY to time consuming. Its sounds almost impossible but its very possible..It takes years to learn it though, even they're still learning.