Naw i figure it out X) i read all the pages you have up so far and i gotta say, i really love them. These doujinshi's are in my top five! You stick with their personalities and not make them extremely out of character. Which i really like! Its more believable this way. I've always liked Naruto and Sasuke. Your art makes me want to catch up on the show ^u^ great poses btw! Even the backgrounds are amazing!
Oh god, thats a huge reason why I dont really read other peoples doujinshis. They make the characters act so...weird! It makes me feel extremely uncomfortable.. Especially when I see Sasuke smiling or laughing. It makes my eyes bleed.. Sasuke doesnt smile or laugh. If anything he would give a quick annoyed smirk, or go "Hmph.." as a tiny laugh of relief. Nothing like " HAHAHA! WOW NARUTO I LUFF YOU." ARGGGFFF! Why don't people see how weird it is?! UUAAAGHHHHHHHHHH *Head explodes with blood everywhere*
Yeah i was just reading one where Sasuke was saying all this embarrassing stuff and acting like a spaz about it. The person drew him so well too. It was a shame it wasnt really Sasuke. I had to stop reading it when they made Naruto way too cool. So thanks again for staying true to their characters. Haha yr reply made me laugh too X)