I love the first panel so much, Sasuke is so full of expression. Love seeing him with his guard so low. Also love the way he and Naruto look in the fourth panel, fighting like children. I like your style a lot.
Thanks, I try to keep my Sasuke in character as much as possible though. When I want to express emotion I make it fast and quick. Sasuke isn't the type of character that expressing something for to long.. It just looks weird on his face in my opinion. Btw, sorry for the late reply! I hate my style a lot..
Don't worry about replying late; I don't mind. In fact... I don't check dA much so I just noticed your message. Sorry.
I find your art to be both beautiful and in character, which in fandom is of course a gift from Heaven. I personally really, truly, absolutely adore your style and it's among my top favorites; wish you would like it more yourself because aside from being vibrantly lovely, it's *yours* alone; I wouldn't mistake it for anybody else's. ;_; Still, I understand your feeling... It's part of human nature to be unsatisfied. But that's not necessarily a bad thing.
As for Sasuke, he's definitely in character (everyone is). Being expressive doesn't make him any less Sasuke-like; it's all about the context and the execution. I see people fail at characterizing him pretty often, but your Sasuke is perfect.
LOL! Shikamaru..married couple although it's true Naruto's face and Sasuke's reaction tho I just can't XD haha I love this lol I almost thought I forgot about this story but turns out it's actually just been awhile since the last update so yay lol