Sasuke seems like he WOULD follow naruto home in the rain and peek in on him while he sleeping. I dunno, i just feel like uchihas in general are super possessive and arent afraid of going after what they want ... even if that means he could be branded as a creepy naruto stalker forever ... oh well XD Good luck naruto!!! Youre gonna need it~
Perhaps Sasuke became angry when Naruto crumpled up the note, or maybe he's jealous of Sakura (if Naruto likes her in your doujinshi.) He could attack Naruto and confront him and then..."stuff" can happen. Hurrrr.
Idk, just throwing out random ideas lol. This is really interesting and I love your style. This doujinshi can't go to waste!
But even if you discontinue it, I will read it over and over until you take it own. Keep up the good work!
LOL, I was thinking about that actually but Im trying to sorta keep it for all ages ya know? I dont want a 14 year old yaoi loving girl to have to sit and read sex..It would just make everything awkward for her ya know? I mean, Im trying to keep this from turning into a porn for only 18+, I want younger yaoi lovers to be able to read it also but I totally feel you on this one. It would be very hot