I love the first panel so much, Sasuke is so full of expression. Love seeing him with his guard so low. Also love the way he and Naruto look in the fourth panel, fighting like children. I like your style a lot.
Thanks, I try to keep my Sasuke in character as much as possible though. When I want to express emotion I make it fast and quick. Sasuke isn't the type of character that expressing something for to long.. It just looks weird on his face in my opinion. Btw, sorry for the late reply! I hate my style a lot..
Don't worry about replying late; I don't mind. In fact... I don't check dA much so I just noticed your message. Sorry.
I find your art to be both beautiful and in character, which in fandom is of course a gift from Heaven. I personally really, truly, absolutely adore your style and it's among my top favorites; wish you would like it more yourself because aside from being vibrantly lovely, it's *yours* alone; I wouldn't mistake it for anybody else's. ;_; Still, I understand your feeling... It's part of human nature to be unsatisfied. But that's not necessarily a bad thing.
As for Sasuke, he's definitely in character (everyone is). Being expressive doesn't make him any less Sasuke-like; it's all about the context and the execution. I see people fail at characterizing him pretty often, but your Sasuke is perfect.
LOL! Shikamaru..married couple although it's true Naruto's face and Sasuke's reaction tho I just can't XD haha I love this lol I almost thought I forgot about this story but turns out it's actually just been awhile since the last update so yay lol
I love this page so, so much!! The panel with the fighting scene is truly epic, so awesome! Poor Shikamaru, Naru and Sasu are so problematic xD But he is right, they look like a married couple hahaha! And the last panel is pure awesomeness, Naruto's shocked face hahaha that made my day And Sasuke looks so upset hehe. Awesome page as always, love your doujin so, so, sooooo much <3 <3 <3
naru why is your thumb in his mouth NARU NARU TO NARU NO oh gosh i hope you've been feeling alright and take your time with pages be sure to eat properly have you been sleeping uZU I LOVE YOU STAY HEALTHY //lays on
LOL, thanks so much! Im taking a break from DA because Im really stressed out by it atm.. I probably wont be submitting/around much anymore. This wont mean I abandoned this comic though.. Ill definitely make a few more pages.
Thanks, I was sure I was gonna just drop it but after seeing a few others finish theirs up I was like "Ugh, Im so lame. I never finished mine.." so I decided to try one more time. Hopefully Ill be able to get through this.. I think theres only about 7 pages left.